My awesome park

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by : Olin
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When I maid my park I liked the way me and my friends were giving great ideas. I also liked how we were using kind words.  We wodnt correct each other, I like how all of us are friends and we like building together.

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  • Your park looks great! I would enjoy visiting this park because you planned for fun areas but also left a lot of space for picnics, playing fetch with my dog or just walking.

    Your group knows how to work together, kind words are always important because it keeps everyone in a positive mood.

    If I may ask, would you consider correcting each other respectfully to improve your creation? That is called critiquing and it helps improve everyone’s work.

    Keep on being kind, inventing, and writing about what you do!

    Mrs. Ro
    Elementary School Librarian
    Cannaday Elementary
    Mesquite, TX

  • I think the park design was well planned. I especially enjoyed the open spaces you left for picnics, playing tag with my dog, or just taking a walk.

    Your group seems to be a great team! Kind words are always necessary to keep everyone in a positive mood.

    May I ask, would you consider correcting each other respectfully? That is called critiquing and it helps improve the project and also lets your teammates think about their ideas in a new way.

    Continue creating and writing about what you do, it will help you Get better at inventing and sharing your work.

    Mrs. Ro
    Librarian
    Cannaday Elementary
    Mesquite, Texas

  • Building together is the best! Great teamwork!

  • Sorry but I’ll try to go back and correct it next time

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