My personal narrative

Bang!Bang!Bang! this is the sound of trying to hit a trick shot. Over and over again.On July 14,2016 my friends and I were getting everything set up for the trick shot. It took about 20 mins. To set it up, but we finished.

We started at about 8:00 a.m, and stopped at about 10:00 P.M. We were trying for so long the smell of sweat and Cheetos filled the air. But that next day on July 15,2016 my hands turned into rivers but then after all the energy I put into I did it. My frustration and anger, turned into happiness. After that, all my friends were so proud of me. I  showed my parents but they didn’t get what I showed them. They had puzzled faces and looked clueless. But my little brother saw the kill cam. He gave me a hug and told me that the kill cam was nice.He has never seen a trick shot before so he had an amazed look on his face. My parents, still did not know I did    so I explained it to them. I played the rest of the day with my friends. The moral of the story is that you can do anything that you set your mind to. All you have to do is believe in yourself and you can do anything.


1 Comment

  • Dear Christopher,
    I like how you added a sound effect three times at the beginning. I like trick shots, too. They are so cool! How did you set up your trick shot? What did you use? I think you should add what happened during the trick shot.


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