Dear Miss Florian

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Dear Miss Florian,                                                                  


I am super excited that you are going to do a James and the Giant Peach play. I can’t wait to see it, I hope the costumes are very detailed.I hope a lot of people come to see the play.

 I have a few suggestions for the costumes that I’ve seen when I have been trick or treating. I think Centipede should have fake arms for how many he has, and for Glow worm you should put a flashlight at the bottom of his costume so that makes his butt glow. I was wondering how you were going to have the flying peach scene where the seagulls pull the peach to get it out of the water. I have an idea for inside of the peach scenery. I was thinking that you could do little sections where all of the characters had their own bed to sleep in. Also I was thinking that the pit could be a could be a cocoon for the earthworm to sleep in. For the flying peach scene I was thinking that you could do it at the very top of the ceiling and the seagulls could be little robots that look like seagulls. I know you are going to get good ideas.

I hope you take thought on some of my ideas. I can’t wait to see the production. I know that the JCA is going to be filled with guests.

Sincerely, Natalie




  • It’s a nice paragraph but I would make it a little bit longer. It only took me about 45 seconds to read the entire thing. Not trying to be mean just trying to help you out.

    • where’s your post

      • I think you just have to click on my name.

  • I agree with Alex, just trying to help you out. But also, I think this is great but could be a bit longer! I love your questions and how detailed they are. Keep up the great work!

  • I had some of the same ideas as you. Like Alex and Caylah said maybe make it a little longer next time. Keep up the great work.

  • That was great I really like the suggestions about how the costumes would be. Miss Florian should take some suggestions from you.

  • I am going to agree with Caylah, Morgan and Alex to make it longer. Also make it like a couple paragraphs long for example look at Morgan’s.

  • You have some great questions that I never thought of !

    I think that your paragraph is decent in length it could be longer but i think its A,OK!

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