Miss Florian Letters

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Dear Miss Florian,

First, thanks for coming up with the idea for making James and The Giant Peach play. Who are you going to choose to be in it and how are you going to make the play?

Second, how are you going to make the characters?

I have some suggestions for the play like get some elevator cables for the peach. For Aunt Spiker and Aunt Sponge you should get costumes for the people that are doing the characters.

Thirdly, I have some suggestions for the play so when you make the peach make it out of styrofoam and then paint it the colors of the peach. For the parade you should have a green screen and show a parade from the movie. I hope you have some luck with making the play.

Thank you for doing the play I hope I can go to it!

6 Comments

  • I wish the paragraphs were a little longer because it was so good.

    • Thanks for your feedback guys.

  • Zak, this is so great. I agree with you 100% but I think the paragraphs could be longer an more detailed. Anyway, I love this letter and great job.

  • Maybe next time you could make it a little longer. You could also maybe add more questions to it. But great job.

  • Great job Zak! Maybe you could do something like, “I have a few suggestions, like using elevator cables”. Instead of “I have a few suggestions like using elevator cables”. Keep up the great work!

    • Thanks Claire I will change that.

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