Rhyme Challenge 1: Last Day of Summer

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What up, y’all? Summer is over,

and all the kids are acting all sober,

you know that summer is king,

but unfortunately it whooshes by in a swing.

 

All the kids are crying on the ground,

and every little tear is passed all around,

why did summer have to leave?

almost all kids can’t believe

 

Summer!

Summer passed away,

in an instant,

when it all came down,

to school,

Summer!

Summer passed away,

in an instant, and it all fell down,

to school, (x2)

 

Kids are whining, kids are trying,

kids are lying, kids are sighing,

you might wonder why kids dread,

but it’s all over in that thread,

it’s easy, but what’s the answer?

Oh look! For kids, today’s like cancer!

 

Summer!

Summer passed away,

in an instant,

when it all came down,

to school,

Summer!

Summer passed away,

in an instant, and it all fell down,

to school, (x2)

 

My scars are bursting open,

and my head is sweatin’

but I knoooooooow,

 

Summer!

Summer passed away,

in an instant, and it all fell down, to school!

 

Oh, why did it have to leave, (summer passed away)

I don’t want to go back to school,  (but you’ll have to,)

but I know,

that this day will forever be stupid.

 

2 Comments

  • Hello hellooo #NotificationSquad ! 😎😎 How’s everyone enjoying their summer?? 🌞🌞 It’s getting pretty hot where I am, so I thought we’d cool off with a classic summer treat A SNOW CONE! 🍨😋 What’s your favourite cold treat for summer? 🤔 I wanna know!! 👇👇

  • I really like this poem/song. very good point of view on how it feels when summer ends. i personally think that it was kind of repetitive but i’m sure it was due to it being written as a song. i liked the part where you said “my scars are bursting open and my head is sweatin’ but i knooooow” . i don’t have much to correct or anything i think it is fine the way it is. i write my own music too. good work

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