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A hot summer day by the water,

I tried to catch fish that lived under the big dark lake,

but sadly my hopes that day were fake.

I sat by my Nana as I did every year,

I might fall into the lake I worried with great fear,

but my Nana told me I would not fall,

and if I did she would grab me before I fell.

That was my Nana’s natural, she always made sure I was well.



  • I really liked that you did a good job with the rhyming. I also have a fear of falling in the water.

  • When you wrote the words “the big dark lake”, it put a picture in my mind.

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